Great start, but then you change it...
I really loved the way this song started out. It was a wonderful beat that really had me feeling it. But when you transition into the second movement, I think you just lose what you had built up. The ending was decent, but not necessarily good IMHO.
I would love to see you develope the first movement a bit more, and extend it into a whole song.
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